Welcome to the wonderful world of words and other literary beautifications through not just alliteration, but even analogy, metaphor, lucidity, and possibly even onomatopeia!
But enough stupidity. This is actually where I plan on putting up whole or partial chapters that I have hand written in rough copy (misspellings and basic syntax corrections will mostly be performed in the transfer process though) for personal backup and your enjoyment. I remember and reminisce about The Drop (which I haven't given up on, just put on hold, be patient) and the lovely feedback I received (which doesn't all have to be good either, just constructive will suffice).
The best part about the feedback was the diversity of the group on here gives me a good general base to see what literary (as in dragonlance vs. LOTR, not if you can read) lean my writing is taking and whether or not I want that particular.
Also, out of consideration of other readers and my own navigation, I would request that any replies to this post or feedback of any sort be made in a seperate forum topic, and in return I will make sure that my postings in here are structured as the book flows, and not as I complete a section (I don't really write from start to finish, I like to bounce more).
questions, comments and feedback can also be directed at my gmail account, which is et3beater@gmail.com for those who don't have it.
Alright then, I think I've sufficiently windbagged enough for now. Time for us all to get focused on landing feet first! (We will be dropping into a very... well... just tuck and roll, stay on the path, don't wander alone, and for christ's sake keep your head down!)
Oh, and keep a look out for me, too!